Name: Gabrielle Topic:what the world will be like in a hundred years time
Category
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Main Points
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Comment
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Speech construction
(10)
7/10
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Introduction-gains audience attention
Organisation – flow of speech
Main points developed
Conclusion- audience left with something to think about
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All good but please don't stamper and loud
voice.
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Presentation and delivery
(10)
8/10
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Gesture enhances speech
(stands in one spot, doesn’t over act or over gesture)
Appropriate use of pause,
stance and audience eye contact
Voice modulation
/volume/pace/pitch
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More eye contact and volume
good. |
Content of Speech
(10)
6/10
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The message
Audience appeal/involvement
Relevance, clarity, meaningful
Visual images to deliver the message
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very good
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Language
(5)
5/5 |
Use of grammar and word selection
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more interesting words
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Overall Effectiveness
(10)
6/10
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Impact on judge
Originality
(Topic choice - through to general feeling about the speech as a whole.)
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she really makes me think of a hundred years
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Time
(5)
5/5
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In or close to 3 minutes
( points can be deducted if the speech is under 2 mins 30 secs or over 3 mins 30 secs)
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2 min 36 sec
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